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Buns in the oven,
rising with the heat of fate
baking a love story
(?)
Garden greens inhaled
ground, mocked, stolen, and adored
the salads of skies
(?)
The sour scene of
fellow flavours melting down
to sweet nothing
(?)
The crunch and taste of
all these fermented efforts
delicious lived life
(?)
rising with the heat of fate
baking a love story
(?)
Garden greens inhaled
ground, mocked, stolen, and adored
the salads of skies
(?)
The sour scene of
fellow flavours melting down
to sweet nothing
(?)
The crunch and taste of
all these fermented efforts
delicious lived life
(?)
Literature
Youth
A thousand burning candles
lighting up a temple.
With the quenching of the last flickering flame
the aegis falls,
and the sacred building crumbles.
Literature
A Haiku
Light well past Midnight
full moon glow, lamp post bright, or
Netflix Marathon
Literature
Christmas presents
i.
asking dad
"what would mum like?"
he's no idea either
ii.
at the same store -
buying gifts for
my girl & mum
iii.
married 20 years,
her fake smile more real
than my silk roses
iv.
unwrapping your gift too eagerly,
I miss the tsutsumu!
v.
your present
a "new" novel;
I find a bookmark
vi.
next Christmas
seeing his gift, dad tells me
"I've read this"
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This one is extra deep, which is what happens sometimes when you write at half past ten at night.
Thus, I would absolutely love to hear your thoughts, and constructive feedback!
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Thus, I would absolutely love to hear your thoughts, and constructive feedback!
This is my work, not yours, so you cannot reproduce, copy or edit this work without my permission. Each artist is protected by copyright.
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I wish I had enough knowledge of the written word to critique this! I was amazed at this