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If three is an aquatinted company
I'm sandfully happy
while it is encrusted between my toes
Extending and extended company
Basking beyond the water's edge
A slurry of ocean and shell shards at my feet
In space
Fragmented lights of nebulae
Footprints wash away
In adoration of the sea's song
Can you hear it?
So thought to be encased in conch shells
I will sleep tonight in sway of
Your cool waves
Where the mountain meets the beach
Pristine and friendly
You're a step away from Santorini
But still close to
My heart of home
Timeless beach
Bikinis and ebb and flow
Salty and murky
upon my tongue.
From just after Christmas, written at the beach with lovely company I am a dummy! 

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Me2Smart4U Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2017  Student Digital Artist
I enjoyed your strong and very powerful word flow...Well written :clap:
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PeriodicFable Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2017   Writer
Why, thank you so very much! I am glad you enjoyed it Hug 
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Me2Smart4U Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2017  Student Digital Artist
you are welcome my friend... :love:
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Ndzoodzoo Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
The words sound so beautiful together and really do make my senses remember what it's like to be at the beach. Great job! ^^
Love it!
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PeriodicFable Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2017   Writer
Thank you so much, I am glad it does! It was a great time, with my feet in different textures of sand :D
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AlpinusTheFox Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love this! The imagery is gorgeous, I feel like I can feel the sand and taste the salt!
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PeriodicFable Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2017   Writer
So salty! I am a dummy! Thank you so very much Alpi! It was a fun day.
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Slashh-20000 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2017
niiiiiiiiiiiiiceeeeeeee poem 
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PeriodicFable Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2017   Writer
Thank you very much!
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Slashh-20000 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2017
Welcome !!!
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