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Ambrosia

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Close, in the distance,
with a polished spout above
is a waterfall.

Staged textures
follow the heat of seasons
returning droplets.

Who travel far lands
sticky with yearning for home
the rush of the fall.

Cousins to the tear,
a solute so rarely found;
bio-drenaline.

Branch off onto thee
look to nature's gushing kettle
and don't stop to wait.
Waterfalls are cool. Have you ever visited one?

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Adrolyn's avatar
I like this overall concept.  I wonder if the first stanza could also go last, instead.

The imagery for the 2nd (staged textures) and 5th (branch off) stanzas eludes me.